Tuesday, May 27, 2014

4-g. The Shadow Trader.

1 episode. Approx. 17 minutes. Written by: Charles Williams. Directed by: Nicholas Briggs, Ken Bentley. Produced by: Nicholas Briggs, Jason Haigh-Ellery. Performed by: Sophie Aldred.


THE PLOT

Fraser's Rest was once a bustling shipyard, constructing top-quality space liners. Once. Now it's a shell of its former self, most of its business having gone to newer competitors. It has been given one final gasp of life: A new cargo ship, known by the locals as The Defiance, commissioned thanks to a wealthy man's nostalgia for his boyhood at Fraser's Rest during its glory days. A last chance for those on the decaying shipyard to show what they're capable of.

This is what draws Salim, the Shadow Trader. Salim inherited the trade from his father, who swore it was a noble profession. Great ships, like great buildings, require an ingredient beyond engineering and technology. They require a soul. That's what the Shadow Traders provide: The shadow of a person who best reflects the personality of the edifice. This requires cutting away that person's shadow, and with it a piece of that person's soul.

When Salim sees a young girl with a particularly brash personality on Fraser's Rest, he is certain that he has found a good match for The Defiance. But he hasn't counted on the girl's companion, an unimposing, umbrella-wielding man with a surprising knowledge of Shadow Traders...


CHARACTERS

The Doctor:
 Hasn't come to Fraser's Rest for any particular purpose. He just enjoys watching the launchings of ships, any ships. He likes to imagine where the ship might go, what adventures it might have. He has dealt with Shadow Traders before, and regards them poorly. He refers to the Traders as "parasites," and includes in that description the Traders of old, who took their shadows from willing participants. He also uses the word "victim" to describe those whose shadows are taken, even the ones who sell them willingly.

Ace: Salim first sees her reacting very belligerently to some bad food served to her. In fairness, the food is apparently extremely bad, leaving her gasping and croaking. But she also shows impatience at the Doctor's desire to watch the launch of a new ship. This continues once Salim has trapped her with a lure that roots her shadow (and with it, her) to the spot. When he approaches, she threatens to kick him - "hard" - leaving them in a stalemate long enough for the Doctor to show up. It's a threat she makes good on the instant she's free.

Salim: By his own admission, he's not much of a Shadow Trader.  The knowledge was passed down to him by his dying father only because the old man had no other choice. Salim is presented as a drifter, lacking ambition. His father, who took pride in the trade, would investigate many potential people before settling on the perfect choice for a given building or ship; Salim, by contrast, sees Ace and decides that she'll be "good enough." When he prepares to cut away her shadow, he confesses that he's not really very good at it. The final scene can be read two ways, equally valid: Either Salim takes a drastic action in response to his encounter with the Doctor or, every bit as likely, his ambition to be more is briefly stirred, before his inherent indolence takes over again.


THOUGHTS

The Shadow Trader is another good example of why Big Finish's range of audio-original Short Trips was short lived. It's not a bad story at all. Writer Charles Williams' prose is sharp and descriptive. There is a running theme of decay: Fraser's Rest was once glorious and is now a shadow of its former self; Salim's father was a proud Shadow Trader, who would work tirelessly to do his job perfectly, while Salim is an unkempt drifter who does the minimum required to maintain his trade. The entire concept of the Shadow Traders, both what they do and the effect it has on their victims, is intriguing and could easily form the basis of a fine story.

The problem is that there isn't enough time in the piece's scant, 17-minute duration, to actually tell much of a story. Listening to it, I find myself interested in the concept, sucked in by the descriptions of Salim's father, instructing his son in the Shadow Trade, and genuinely hooked by the Doctor's disgusted yet conflicted account of the Shadow Traders of days past - Traders who were clearly far more formidable than Salim.

But then, just as the story truly seems to be kicking into gear... It's over. A quick tag, the truncated end music, and I'm left saying, "That's it?"

Everything that's here is good, some of it very good. But there just isn't enough, and the story is left feeling incomplete. Which is why I'm left giving a story that I genuinely did enjoy listening to for 15 of its 17 minutes, a below-average grade of...


Overall Rating: 4/10.


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4-f. To Cut a Blade of Grass.

Not Yet Reviewed.

4-e. The Lions of Trafalgar.

Not Yet Reviewed.

4-d. The Old Rogue.

Not Yet Reviewed.

4-c. Lost in the Wakefield Triangle.

Not Yet Reviewed.

4-b. Penny Wise, Pound Foolish.

Not Yet Reviewed.

Friday, February 15, 2013

4-a. A Star Is Born.

1 episode. Approx. 25 minutes. Written by: Richard Dinnick. Directed by: Nicholas Briggs, Ken Bentley. Produced by: David Richardson. Performed by: William Russell.


THE PLOT

A distress call draws the TARDIS to a spaceship that is the sole home remaining to the Metraxi, survivors of a race that became sterile generations earlier. Believing their sterility to be a result of a poisoned homeworld, they fled in search of a new planet, maintaining their population during the search through cloning. Now their ship is breaking down. Radiation is seeping into their atmosphere and is slowly killing them.

The Doctor and his companions are quick to promise help, and the Doctor and Ian begin to investigate at once. They find no malfunction in the ship's systems. But when they search further, they find a truth that's even more disturbing...


CHARACTERS

The Doctor:
 While William Russell can't make himself sound exactly like Hartnell, he does manage to fit some of Hartnell's mannerisms into his First Doctor line deliveries. As such, his readings of First Doctor stories always end up being a pleasure to listen to. When the Doctor becomes righteously indignant at a terrible discovery, the image is vivid of the First Doctor standing, chin raised, grasping his lapels as he imperiously stares down a villain. Russell's reading is no small part of bringing such moments gloriously to life.

Ian/Barbara/Susan: The 25-minute length and comparatively complex story leaves little time for characterizations of the companions. Ian acts as the Doctor's assistant, helping him to investigate the radiation leak, but he really is just a sounding board for the Doctor here. There is a nice exchange between Barbara and Susan, in which Barbara references The Bible as "the book of our religion," only for Susan to correct her by reminding her that it is "one book, of one religion." This is a good moment, one which feels right for the characters even as it expands beyond the usual teacher/student, surrogate mother/daughter roles they were usually confined to in the series.


THOUGHTS

The final volume of Big Finish's short-lived audio "Short Trips" series launches with this atypically lengthy story. Whereas most of the "Short Trips" on these discs run somewhere between 10 - 20 minutes, this one clocks in at 25 minutes, the length of a full episode.

Writer Richard Dinnick fills that time with a full episode's worth of story, which he even takes care to structure and pace like a black & white Hartnell story. It's not difficult to picture the whiskered, pot-bellied Metraxi as benign aliens in the early Hartnell era, and a fair amount of time is provided to establishing their background and even a bit of their culture. The regulars are split up, with the Doctor and Ian investigating the dilemma of the episode while Barbara and Susan talk with the Metraxi and share cultural insights. The character divide is fully in-keeping with the televised era.

It's a well-told story, tightly structured but with a measured enough pace to reflect the characters of this TARDIS crew. William Russell does his usual fine job of narration, switching effortlessly between the First Doctor and Ian. Between his skillful recreations of this story's primary regulars and the effects layered onto the Metraxi voices, the story almost feels "full-cast"... though, of course, Russell can't do much with the Barbara and Susan bits.

The story does suffer from one huge continuity error, a glaring one given the era in which it is set. The story's climax depends on the Doctor being able to control the TARDIS... Something he absolutely could not do at this point in the series. I could have blinked at this if there had even been a couple of short lines to address it. As it is, however, it feels like a glaring error that's allowed to pass simply because it would be inconvenient to do otherwise. This is sufficient for me to dock a point from the story's score.

Even so, it stands with a solid score as one of the better audio original "Short Trips."


Overall Rating: 7/10.


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