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Tuesday, May 27, 2014

4-g. The Shadow Trader.

1 episode. Approx. 17 minutes. Written by: Charles Williams. Directed by: Nicholas Briggs, Ken Bentley. Produced by: Nicholas Briggs, Jason Haigh-Ellery. Performed by: Sophie Aldred.


THE PLOT

Fraser's Rest was once a bustling shipyard, constructing top-quality space liners. Once. Now it's a shell of its former self, most of its business having gone to newer competitors. It has been given one final gasp of life: A new cargo ship, known by the locals as The Defiance, commissioned thanks to a wealthy man's nostalgia for his boyhood at Fraser's Rest during its glory days. A last chance for those on the decaying shipyard to show what they're capable of.

This is what draws Salim, the Shadow Trader. Salim inherited the trade from his father, who swore it was a noble profession. Great ships, like great buildings, require an ingredient beyond engineering and technology. They require a soul. That's what the Shadow Traders provide: The shadow of a person who best reflects the personality of the edifice. This requires cutting away that person's shadow, and with it a piece of that person's soul.

When Salim sees a young girl with a particularly brash personality on Fraser's Rest, he is certain that he has found a good match for The Defiance. But he hasn't counted on the girl's companion, an unimposing, umbrella-wielding man with a surprising knowledge of Shadow Traders...


CHARACTERS

The Doctor:
 Hasn't come to Fraser's Rest for any particular purpose. He just enjoys watching the launchings of ships, any ships. He likes to imagine where the ship might go, what adventures it might have. He has dealt with Shadow Traders before, and regards them poorly. He refers to the Traders as "parasites," and includes in that description the Traders of old, who took their shadows from willing participants. He also uses the word "victim" to describe those whose shadows are taken, even the ones who sell them willingly.

Ace: Salim first sees her reacting very belligerently to some bad food served to her. In fairness, the food is apparently extremely bad, leaving her gasping and croaking. But she also shows impatience at the Doctor's desire to watch the launch of a new ship. This continues once Salim has trapped her with a lure that roots her shadow (and with it, her) to the spot. When he approaches, she threatens to kick him - "hard" - leaving them in a stalemate long enough for the Doctor to show up. It's a threat she makes good on the instant she's free.

Salim: By his own admission, he's not much of a Shadow Trader.  The knowledge was passed down to him by his dying father only because the old man had no other choice. Salim is presented as a drifter, lacking ambition. His father, who took pride in the trade, would investigate many potential people before settling on the perfect choice for a given building or ship; Salim, by contrast, sees Ace and decides that she'll be "good enough." When he prepares to cut away her shadow, he confesses that he's not really very good at it. The final scene can be read two ways, equally valid: Either Salim takes a drastic action in response to his encounter with the Doctor or, every bit as likely, his ambition to be more is briefly stirred, before his inherent indolence takes over again.


THOUGHTS

The Shadow Trader is another good example of why Big Finish's range of audio-original Short Trips was short lived. It's not a bad story at all. Writer Charles Williams' prose is sharp and descriptive. There is a running theme of decay: Fraser's Rest was once glorious and is now a shadow of its former self; Salim's father was a proud Shadow Trader, who would work tirelessly to do his job perfectly, while Salim is an unkempt drifter who does the minimum required to maintain his trade. The entire concept of the Shadow Traders, both what they do and the effect it has on their victims, is intriguing and could easily form the basis of a fine story.

The problem is that there isn't enough time in the piece's scant, 17-minute duration, to actually tell much of a story. Listening to it, I find myself interested in the concept, sucked in by the descriptions of Salim's father, instructing his son in the Shadow Trade, and genuinely hooked by the Doctor's disgusted yet conflicted account of the Shadow Traders of days past - Traders who were clearly far more formidable than Salim.

But then, just as the story truly seems to be kicking into gear... It's over. A quick tag, the truncated end music, and I'm left saying, "That's it?"

Everything that's here is good, some of it very good. But there just isn't enough, and the story is left feeling incomplete. Which is why I'm left giving a story that I genuinely did enjoy listening to for 15 of its 17 minutes, a below-average grade of...


Overall Rating: 4/10.


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Tuesday, August 23, 2011

1-e. The Deep.


1 episode. Approx. 15 minutes. Written by: Ally Kennen. Directed by: Nicholas Briggs, Ken Bentley. Produced by: Nicholas Briggs, Jason Haigh-Ellery. Performed by: Peter Davison. 


THE PLOT

When Nyssa announces that she thinks she's fixed the TARDIS chameleon circuit, the Doctor decides to test it in a big way: By materializing in the depths of the ocean. The chameleon circuit kicks in, and the TARDIS transforms into a whale... but it doesn't stop with the outside. The console room is replaced by the inside of a whale, and the Doctor and Nyssa are ejected into the sea!

Now the Doctor is left to improvise desperately. He needs to draw the TARDIS-whale to him before it eats, while it's still drawing energy from what's left of the TARDIS core. If it ingests so much as a single krill, it will become fully a whale - stranding the time travelers on Earth for all eternity!


CHARACTERS

The Doctor: Realizes that it's a bad idea for Nyssa to tamper with the TARDIS circuitry. But he's so excited by the thought of having a working chameleon circuit again, that he rationalizes away his doubts. He gives his companion's work only the most cursory inspection before his enthusiasm runs away with him. "If we were to go to Earth and arrive in a desert, the TARDIS might become a rock or a cactus... If we arrived in Antarctica, we might become an iceberg!" He pays for his lack of caution by nearly losing the TARDIS, though his quick thinking allows him to get away with only a short period of inconvenience.

Nyssa: Is led to try to fix the Chameleon Circuit because she hopes it will make their lifestyle a bit safer. Perhaps Adric's fate is on her mind? She's dismayed when the Doctor decides to push the circuit's "test run" as far as he can, when she would clearly rather start with something simpler. 


THOUGHTS

The Deep was the 5th Doctor's story from the first Big Finish audio Short Trips collection. It's notable for being written by Ally Kennen, an award-winning young adult fiction writer. Kennen's ability does show. This is a well-written story, with quick but vivid descriptions, and it successfully packs a clever narrative into a brisk 15 minute running time. For the short-lived audio "Short Trips" range, this is above-average.

But not much above average, however - and the culprit, as with so many of the Short Trips, is the running time. With only 15 minutes to work with, there's just enough time to create the problem and explain it before the story has to rush to resolve it. All of these stages are well done, and there are some amusing asides such as the Doctor's worry about the TARDIS-whale mating with a real whale. The only thing lacking is some development. The same story with the Doctor having to make multiple, increasingly desperate attempts to recover his TARDIS would be much more fun - but there isn't enough time to explore any of the complications.

It's an enjoyable 15 minutes - But with a little longer a running time it could have been a lot better.


Overall Rating: 6/10.

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